Giving Our Characters More “Character”

As writers, most of us focus a lot on our characters. We want them to be the best they can be (or the worst they can be when creating villains). Yet, how can we make our characters reflect more “character”? We need to give them habits or styles/ preferences, body language and movements, and accents and catch phrases that are unique to them and tell us more about their natures.           

 The first category that most of us can easily employ is habits or styles/ preferences. Our character might have a daily ritual of a black coffee and a croissant for breakfast. They might often wear a fedora, a baseball cap, or a do-rag. They might find the smell of pumpkin spice delightful (or they might despite it). Maybe they love black licorice while everyone around them turns up their noses at it. Thus, we’ve completed the entry level to characterization.

The second category is only a step up as we envision our characters as if watching them on a projector screen playing out in our minds. Our characters might show nervousness through twisting their hair, biting their nails, or even biting their lips. They might even drag on a cigarette. Also, pacing can show nervousness or anxiety (or even impatience). Our character might sit silently with crossed arms in the corner, as they try to close themselves off from the pain of the world. Or, we might have a character sporting an expressive, sunshiny smile who walks with a bounce in their step, thus highlighting their optimistic nature. We see our characters in our minds and jot down their descriptions and behavior; they almost “write” themselves.

Then, there is the third category that might be the hardest because it might require deeper research and more analysis, meaning we might need to develop accents and catch phrases for our characters. Now, it is true that we could go overboard as we might not want every character to have a different accent; this might tire and confuse the reader. That is why many stories have a straight-forward accent only with a few catch phrases sprinkled in for particular characters. However, incorporating some local accents, depending upon the character and the region that is being written about, might add the right kind of flavor to the character and the story. This can be done through research as well as personal experience, if one possesses that knowledge. However, we should always make the speech clear enough for the reader to follow. Also, we should be consistent on parts we decide to put into a local accent like keeping the same spelling throughout.

We can check the accent by reading it aloud to ourselves. Is what we hear truly being reflected on the page? It can be a combination of some accent to create the atmosphere and some catch phrases of a certain character or even local, colorful words of the region. For example, I’m currently working on some Appalachian characters, and I have been going over some local phrases and even idioms of the region. I want to work the phrases in naturally and only use them if they are needed. We should never force conversation but let it grow organically. We should also not shy away from making our characters truly our own unique characters by developing our own vision or interpretation.

So, whenever we are developing our characters, we should concentrate more on bringing out the full “character” in our characters through all the tools we have at our disposal like habits, body language, and accents as well as catch phrases. Our characters will thank us for bringing them completely to life.

Hollywood and Bollywood Epic Heroes

Movies offer us not only entertainment but also lessons and hope. Movies have the power to inspire us whether they are fiction or based on true events. Most of us become attached to characters, if the storytelling is done right. The foundation of any great film is a good story and then a well-rounded main character. Today, we want more out of our movies, and still there are writers and directors out there who are giving us some powerful movies whether in Hollywood, Bollywood or some other country. Recently, I’ve discovered the beauty in many Bollywood films (of course with the subtitles). I’ve been thinking about some larger than life types of characters that remind me of an epic hero.

But first, what is a hero? It is someone who saves or helps others. This could even be a doctor or a firefighter. An epic hero, however, is a bit different and is usually the main character of an epic poem like Beowulf. However, the meaning can expand to include any hero of superhuman strength who strikes awe into those who witness their amazing feats. Superheroes could even be considered epic heroes. Sure, sometimes they get help, but they do well on their own overcoming super villains.

What are the characteristics of an epic hero? An epic hero is a champion of freedom who has lots of courage and super strength. He usually has a high sense of justice while being devoted and loyal. And in many cases, he fights for the glory of putting his name down in history. Of course, he might have weaknesses. No one is perfect, but, in general, the epic hero is willing to sacrifice himself in the protection of others and always tries to honor his promises.

This does sound like a tall order, right? But this is what makes the epic hero so amazing! Some examples of an epic hero in Hollywood movies would be:

•       Maximus in The Gladiator (Russell Crowe)
•        William Wallace in Braveheart (Mel Gibson)
•        Nathan Algren in The Last Samurai (Tom Cruise)
•        Leonidas in 300 (Gerard Butler)

 

We can even put Captain America and Superman into this epic hero category. These are strong, honorable, and ethical heroes. They almost seem perfect! And there are so many other inspiring, heart-pumping movies of the epic hero.

One equivalent film that stands out is Baahubali (Parts 1 and 2) featuring actor Prabhas as the epic hero, Baahubali.  This movie has an excellent storyline, vast settings, amazing cinematography, skilled acting, brilliant directing and powerful music. I highly recommend this movie, as it will inspire you!

Still, there are other types of heroes who may have vices or bad habits. They start out looking the opposite of a hero, but as we watch their story unfold and see them struggle with their conscience or overcome obstacles, we cheer them on as they become heroes-- anti-heroes.

We can put Ironman and Batman into this category due to their complexities. Even Jack Sparrow from Pirates of the Caribbean is an unlikely hero. Others who fit into this category would be Mad Max, Rambo, and Harry Callahan from Dirty Harry. They are not perfect, make mistakes and on occasion do some questionable things, but at their core they have a heart or a conscience that sticks to some kind of code of life, and they become the hero that is needed at the moment. An anti-hero is relatable to us because we like to see the human side of a hero and to see they have their struggles and demons to overcome. It makes the story more interesting. Also, it’s better than putting someone onto a pedestal where they will eventually fall off. It also gives us hope that the average person might be able to become a hero, too.

Recently, I viewed an intriguing character in a Bollywood movie (I’m using this term broadly as the film is actually from Kannada region in India). An unusual idea came to my mind while watching the film KGF: Chapter 1 (Kolar Gold Fields). The main character, “Rocky” portrayed by Yash, is an “epic anti-hero.” The reason I add “epic” to his description is the way his character behaves and the way the other characters view him. “Rocky” (the nick-name he chose reflecting a movie poster of Rocky Balboa) starts out as an orphan who has to struggle in the streets; he was left only with his mother’s advice that no matter what “die as a very wealthy man.” 

Rocky becomes strong both physically and mentally. We see in one scene that the mention of his name causes characters to panic and to shake with fear. And we see those who doubt his strength pay in a big way. Yes, he is a criminal, but we see indications of a soft spot or a kindness in various scenes whenever he remembers his mother and whenever he stops to help those less fortunate. Rocky is tough and practically invincible; he’s like a one-man army. And we watch his transformation as he is placed into situations that lead him to become the hero-- the epic anti-hero that is needed.

I’m anxiously waiting for Part 2 of this movie. It was supposed to be released this October, but due to Covid-19 and other issues, it has been delayed, and so far the release date is for January 2021. I recommend KGF: Chapter 1, as you will enjoy the unique character and storyline.

By the way, I’m hoping that Part 2 will lead Rocky to be the anti-hero that he can be; my fear from some of the rumors is that he might not do what we are expecting. Hopefully, his conscience will lead him to do the right thing so he will become the epic anti-hero we are waiting for. We will just have to wait and see.

We all need heroes, even epic anti-heroes, who give us hope that we can overcome evil and injustice in this world. Let us be inspired by the heroes of Hollywood, Bollywood and any other place that is producing such magical movies.

Surviving Isolation

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Hey, Everyone! I hope that you are safe and well. I know that times are tough, and we are all in this difficult situation together. The most important thing we can do is to stay home and stay safe, if at all possible. And we need to pray for not only ourselves, but also for the rest of the world while keeping in our prayers those who are on the front lines trying to help us and to keep us safe.

How are you handling staying inside? I know that for some people it might be easy, but for other people it is difficult, especially those who are used to socializing and being out. But we can do this! We have to for our safety and for the safety of those we love as well as everyone else.

Below are some suggestions that I hope might help you stay busy so that you forget you are isolated, well kind of forget.

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Some ideas for staying inside might include:

• Calling and talking to a friend or a loved one (either by phone or video chat)
• Doing activities or games with those living together (cards, board games, PS4/Xbox)
• Cooking a new recipe (desserts sound delicious)
• Exercising with a video or on a treadmill (we need to stay in shape after eating the dessert)
• Reading books (one of my favorite activities)
• Watching movies or shows (also something I enjoy)
• Listening to some songs that you like (create your favorite playlists)
• Drawing or painting (even if you’re not Picasso, you can still just enjoy it
• Making some kind of arts and crafts (this could be fun with kids)
• Repairing or cleaning up around the house
• Working from home (at least some of us)
• Writing (those who enjoy writing can keep a journal or write a bit of poetry and stories)
• Watch videos about anything you want to know more about (a time to learn new things)

*As for me, I like watching videos on every aspect of filmmaking, as this is my passion after writing.

I’m teaching online for the time being during this crisis, so you can imagine the homework I have to grade. At least it keeps me busy.  I’m sure many of us are now starting to get used to working online. Some essential workers still must go out and brave the world, but most of us are stuck either working from home and probably learning some new skills.

While I’m resting and sometimes getting bored at looking at the four walls, I do try to do some of the things on my list, and it does help. I also spend my time writing. I’m rewriting and editing one novel, and I got inspired a couple of weeks ago and started a new novel. At least while writing, I can escape to another world and live with my characters.

Whatever works to de-stress you and help you through this isolation period, then please do it, and I hope you enjoy it. Below are suggestions of some movies, series and books that I enjoy, and believe me it was hard to limit these lists as there are so many amazing books and fantastic movies/shows out there!

We should really thank all of the artists, writers, filmmakers, actors, game designers and all creatives who give us such amazing things to watch, play and read. We would be completely bored without their efforts and creativity.

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My top movies (different genres, as I like variety)

Forrest Gump

The Godfather

Knives Out

Joker

The Bone Collector

The Dark Knight

The Avengers (all of them, especially the first)

Black Panther

Iron Man (all of them)

Venom

A Few Good Men

Django Unchained

Angels and Demons

Murder on the Orient Express

Lord of the Rings (the whole Trilogy)

Harry Potter series

Monster-in-Law

My Best Friend’s Wedding  

The Matrix

Hannibal

It

Us

The Conjuring (both 1 and 2)

The King’s Speech

The Post

Spotlight

Braveheart

The Last Samurai

Creed (1 and 2)

Star Wars

Pirates of the Caribbean (all of them)

The Hunger Games

Any Jackie Chan movie (He is amazing!)

Older movies:

Casablanca

His Girl Friday 

Any movie by Hitchcock

Some Great 80s Movies (for memories):

The Breakfast Club

Ferris Bueller’s Day Off 

Back to the Future

The Lost Boys

The Terminator

The Princess Bride

Beetlejuice

The Karate Kid (the original)

Raiders of the Lost Ark

Dead Poets Society

The Color Purple

Field of Dreams

Movies for Kids (I like them, too)

Aladdin

Brave

Beauty and the Beast (cartoon form)

Megamind

Shark Boy and Lava Girl

Spy Kids

Paddington

Charlie and the Chocolate Factory

The Lion King

Charlotte’s Web

The Wizard of Oz

Harry Potter (again as it fits here)

Bollywood (get the subtitles in English):

Bahubali (1 and 2; excellent: story, cinematography, music, acting, etc.)

Sanju

Munna Bhai

3 Idiots

Dangal  

My top series

Stranger Things

Mindhunter

Hannibal

Dexter

Peaky Blinders

Dawn til Dusk  (I liked the series better than the movie)

V-Wars

The Mist (Stephen King is good any time)

Sherlock

Witcher

Taboo

Vikings

Supernatural 

The Sinner

Vampire Diaries

The Originals

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My top books (or writers)

Classics by Jane Austen, Ernest Hemingway, Charlotte Bronte, Shakespeare, etc.

Who doesn’t like a good Shakespeare? Lots of drama with murder, love and mayhem!

Janet Evanovich (any book, especially Wicked Appetite and Wicked Business)

Dan Brown (Da Vinci Code; Angels and Demons)

Stephen King (all of his books)

Anne Rice (Wolfgift is my favorite)

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Highly recommended Indie Authors and those from small Publishing Houses (also my friends):

Norma Beishir (Chasing the Wind and The Unicorn’s Daughter)

Eve Gaal (Penniless Hearts and Penniless Souls)

Lorelei Bell (all of the Sabrina Strong series: Trill, Nocturne, Caprice, etc.)

Mark Richard Hunter (Storm Chaser and The Notorious Ian Grant)

Cameo Renae (Hidden Wings series and ARV-3)

Mary Ting (ISAN: International Sensory Assassin Network)

Cathy Jackson (Five Coffees)

Brooklyn Hudson (Wishbone series)

Cyn Bagley (She Called It, Wolf)

Lin Robinson (Bailin’)

Angie Fox (The Accidental Demon Slayer series)

Susan Finlay (Liars’ Games: Project Chameleon)

*Note that some of these authors are currently having special deals on their books, so check them out. Some of the best stories I’ve ever read are by Indie Authors.

Whatever you do to help you survive the isolation, I hope you find something to read or to watch from my suggestions. Stay safe and enjoy!

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Discovering Your Aha Moments

Happy New Year everyone! I hope the coming year will be a happy and amazing year for us all. I want to share an essay with you that I wrote a few months ago. I was contemplating how life is a struggle, and how there are small and big obstacles. These small obstacles train us to endure the bigger obstacles. Despite the hardships of life, if we pace ourselves and keep getting up after we fall, eventually we will overcome most things. I want to assure you that there is a light at the end of the tunnel. Each one of us is on our own journey through life, and we have to find the aha moment in our lives that will help us to grow and to improve. However, once we do have those moments of growth, it usually changes our perspectives and how we choose to live our lives.

Climbing Mount Epiphany

By

Lena Winfrey Hayat

Reaching an epiphany sounds like climbing Mount Everest, and sometimes it might compare to such a great feat. Many people go through pivotal changes in their lives that stem from tough decisions that sometimes change the course of their lives. However, how many people have really had an epiphany of self-realization? How many have experienced being on a point where they are standing on a precipice and ready to fall into the dark abyss while praying wings will miraculously appear to protect them from falling? It is no easy task to stand outside ourselves and to see the moment of truth where we discover something new in our thinking or in the way we view ourselves and the world around us. It is both rare and amazing to find that glorious moment of an epiphany that enlightens and bathes our souls in the light of a new dawn.

How do we recognize an epiphany? Once we experience it, we just understand what it is. It is almost like turning on a bright light in a very dark room and illuminating every item and corner in that room. It is akin to an “aha” moment when the light bulb turns on in our brains. Yet, an epiphany runs deeper than the surface of our minds as it also engulfs our hearts and souls, thus reaching to the core of our beings. Once we have had an epiphany, there is no turning back to the old world or archaic way of thinking. We are changed forever. Despite facing small or big epiphanies, both change us and have lasting effects upon us. My life has been full of pivotal moments and small epiphanies. My small epiphanies were like stepping stones, little moments of learning, that prepared me to face my great epiphanies.

Being raised as a female in the Southern part of the United States and coming from a nice, middle class family, I led a life where most of my needs were met. My father indeed protected and worked hard to take care of our family. I am so grateful for my parents who gave me a strong foundation by teaching me morals as well as hard work ethics. They taught me to be polite and honest. They encouraged me to help others. They even gave me the space to dream and inspired me to reach higher to achieve more. Despite growing up shy and basically being quiet at school, I felt I had some special quality inside and some great purpose in this life. Yet, there were days where I would feel sad because I was not perfect. It took me many years to shed the pressure of trying to be perfect. We all live in an imperfect world and we are all imperfect, so why was I pressuring myself to reach the unattainable? I finally decided to be happy for at least trying my best.  

Due to society’s roles for women that have been ingrained in both the male and female psyches, we sometimes forget to question our roles. Life is not black and white, but it is a series of various shades of grey. One small epiphany was realizing that I didn’t have to be stuck in the traditional female role. Many women still struggle with this because today most women work outside of the home, and then when they reach home they continue their work. We begin to believe we are superwomen who must do everything perfectly, both our job and our work at home including raising the children. It is exhausting! Sometimes we forget to ask for help, and there are a few spouses and family members who would gladly help. Yet, women are filled with guilt when they fall below either their own self-expectations or the expectations set by society. Once we realize that the best way to live would be mutual cooperation within our families, then the pressure can be alleviated. We need to stop listening to all of the dictates of society and start listening to our hearts and needs, thus defining ourselves or even recreating ourselves into stronger, more confident, relaxed women. Once our perspectives and priorities shift, we can discover who we really are and what gifts we have to offer the world. And this also needs to come with a spirit of cooperation and compassion from the other members of society who we would like to see supporting and helping everyone in the human race.

We all have our ups and downs in life. I have gone through many hardships and passed through tough obstacles to the point I thought my heart and soul were broken. And yet, I held on with some unknown strength. I was raised like most girls who heard stories of princes and knights saving ladies in distress, and I was waiting for years for a gentleman, a knight in shining armor, to come and rescue me from my difficult life. Yet, no one came. No help arrived and almost no support or encouragement could be found. I was alone in my dungeon drowning in depression and despair.  

Then, I had a great epiphany! I realized no one would ever come to rescue me; I had to save myself and be my own knight! The moment of truth lit my path and beckoned me to be strong and brave. Even though I was shaking on the inside and carried some self-doubt, I was now driven with a new purpose. If I were going to change my life and ease my pain, then I would have to stand strong and persevere all expected storms. I would have to slay the dragon and deliver myself to safety because no one else would or could. That great epiphany, the glorious moment of truth and self-realization, propelled me forward to face all of my enormous enemies and obstinate obstacles, both external and internal. I became my own hero to save myself. I climbed the great Mount Epiphany! Once I had reached the top, I could relax and breathe; while looking down I was amazed at the steep climb and the fact that indeed I had made it. It was a great feeling of accomplishment that matured my outlook on the world and changed my perspective and life forever.

I had won my great battle, along with little battles, and along the way I discovered rewards and treasures that now fill my life. This does not mean my life is suddenly easy or luxurious. There are small daily struggles and battles that need to be overcome to keep my life on its course. However, my epiphany has led me to become the captain of my own ship, and I plot my own course despite fighting against the waves and having to reset my course along the way.

Another realization, or epiphany, revealed itself after I had championed my cause and had apparently won. However, this victory was bitter-sweet as in order to gain my freedom and dignity, I had to sacrifice some things that pierced my heart and racked my soul. It was both a time of immense relief and a time of great sorrow. What a paradox! But then nothing of value in life comes without a price. I embraced my new future while having some moments of sadness. However, life is constantly changing so I’m reassured that I will regain my losses in other ways. Sometimes we have to just roll with the river and flow into the unknown while being thankful to have survived this game of life with only a few “injuries”.

Surely there are more epiphanies to come, as I am continuously gaining knowledge, even self-knowledge, until I reach my grave. However, this pivotal epiphany was a major shift in my thinking and in changing the course of my life. It was the wake-up call I needed to fully realize my self-worth and how to stand up for myself. This monumental epiphany put me on my chosen path to reach my purpose in this life.

                             

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